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Tuesday, November 3, 2009

literary devices blog

Angela brushed her skirt, took a deep breath and walked towards where he was sitting. She was about to say your a butt head a but she saw how cute he was and instead of going off on him she blushed like a fresh cherry and said hi my name is Angela.
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2 comments:

  1. itsjocelyn:)November 3, 2009 at 7:40 PM

    you need are more to your story and add literary devices :) but i like the beggining

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  2. Kaithlyn AbulenciaNovember 4, 2009 at 11:45 AM

    I like how you said "she blushed like a fresh cherry". That was a great similie.

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